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Hi, my name is Sierra Rochelle
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A Nite's Tale Part TEN*~CONTEST ENDING

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By StrawberryRose Send DollMail
Created: 2008-10-30 14:27:29 All stories by StrawberryRose
A/N:

I want to thank the clique Nite Narration for this contest...i've been on a writing dry for months...and you guys made me enjoy writing again. I've been having such a hard time really, I know my grammar isn't the best...I've been hearing that alot and Im sorry...but I'm trying.

I want to thank Peggie and Kelpie for the story The Awesome Two which really help me write this, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE BRING IT BACK AGAIN!

You guys never gave it an ending = ( -cries-

REMEMEBR this is NOT the ending I had in mine...but because the ending date is today...I decided to end it like this HOWEVER if you wanted me to continue on...I shall...I don't mind..it'll be fun to see what else I can come up with. LOL though I DO know excately how I want to end it...the journey to get to the ending...is what would be interesting. Nevertheless, thank you guys for reading.

I really loves you all for it ^__^

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Si erra beings to change into the new clothes her mother had laid out for her the night before. She just came back from the river with Lush Rosh, where the cool waters ease some tensions in her muscles. Her hair all soft and wet, now in her new clothing, she flops on the comfortable bed that offer her the best sleep she had in years and begin to close her eyes.

Now why couldn’t her life be like this? This peaceful feeling deep within her soul she is now experiencing. All was missing was her grandmother. Sierra now lying there feels the returning guilt of leaving her grandmother behind. Sure, her Grandmother Willy would have prohibited her from leaving, but only because she was so scared to lose her too, and now, she did anyway.

Her Grandmother always tried so hard to make Sierra happy, especially after her parents disappear. She worked twice has hard to give her things she wanted and even teaching her things of her old days. Sierra open her eyes slightly overwhelm by guilt. She needs to get back to Riken Hills and when she does, she won’t go alone. She comes back with parents. Home is with her love ones surrounding her and even with one component missing a void in her heart will always linger. She can’t be without her parents and she can’t be without her Grandmother Willy. Together, they were the complete package.

Sierra sat up immediately after hearing a large crash right outside her room door. Yells and gun shots was being blare and Sierra storms out. The living room wall was torn down and the Wise One was sitting in her chair staring at the new invaders. The large guy who took care of the Wise One who name came known has Alfred was on the floor, blood seeping in the wood.

A person with a large knife and two other people behind him snickers as they stare at Sierra and the Wise One. Sierra was too far away to help the Wise One for one sudden movement he guy could easily swing his overly large blade and kill the Wise One.

The old woman look upon Sierra and smiles.

”Do not hate them for what they about to do. They are being control. Everyone in the Doll Palace is being control. It started with the humans first. Find the Magical Pen and save this place-“

Sierra screams as she begins to be tuck away. Tears pouring down her face as she just witness the guy swing his knife cutting off the Wise One head. She looks behind her and sees her parents holding each other hand and Lush Rose gripping unto her wrist while running.

”Turn around and help run- I can’t drag you away!” she yells at Sierra. Her heart pounding fast and her head spinning she did as she was told, tears pouring down her face, which block her viewing. If Lush Rose wasn’t holding her hand, she knew she would run straight into a tree. She never wanted to witness something as brutal as that, too see so many deaths around her so many killings, and the smell was too much to bare! The smell of fresh and old blood and human waste, the gunpowder and the smoke made the air thick and hard to breathe. To see inside the human body, no Sierra never wanted to see this. No one should ever sees it and now all she wanted to do was vomit. Vomit away the gruesomeness of this life. Everything here was just too real.

Soon she realizes they came to a halt and she wipes away her tears away so she could see. She wanted to cry for the nice old lady, for Kelpie and Peggie even Alfred but somehow she knew she had to force some kind of strength. Wherever it came from, she needs it now. When she blinks, twice she realizes why they had stop. Creatures surrounded them. Some like the ones she encounter before with the fangs, others with over large claws, some shape into rocks, and others looked human but you knew, you just knew they wasn’t. Then she notice a face in the crowd she recognize. It was the girl, who talks very fast. Sierra scan for a name but it couldn’t call to memory and said the only thing that left her lips hoping it was the right one.

”T…W?” she said slowly and carefully.

The girl simply growl as saliva left her lips dripping to the floor her eyes a blood shot red. Sierra stood up straight in fear. ‘That’s not the girl she meant merely two days ago.”

”I want you guys to leave when I give the signal alright?” says Lush Rose.

”Rose-we…we caun’t leave you behind!” exclaims Sierra.

”Look Strawberry, we don’t have much of a choice. It’s either you stay and DIE here or you go and do something to save this land. These are not the creatures I know! These are not my friends, everyone is acting crazy all this can’t be for the crown! Something is going on and even though I never understood the conversation last night I did understand, only you and your parents can do something about it! Now…GO!” she scream soon the creatures all jump in to attack. Sam picks up his daughter and his wife hold unto him as he dove out. Sierra tried to look up too see what has happen to Lush Rose and only saw her as she begins to twirl really fast, roses, flying in all direction striking some as they fall backwards.

The parents ran for several minutes before stopping by a boulder near the waters. Sam puts Sierra on a rock and drops to the floor, breathing heavily. The area they was at had less trees and instead of seeing the beautiful blue sky, Sierra saw once up in the air, she saw the charcoal and fire from not a long away distance. Angela looks up too and notice it as well.

”This place is falling apart.” She said softly.

”How are we expected to find the Ink Thief? In all of this, messes, this chaos? She doesn’t even SOUND human which means she probably kill us with-- I dunno a throw of her ink?! “ Sierra aggregately moans.

”Hunny you must calm down. Getting upset definitely won’t be the solution to help us.” said Sma his head leaning on the rock.

”But hun, she’s right. How are we expected to find her?” sigh the mother.

”Matha…whose…whose that?” Said Sierra pointing across the river on the other side of the river land; there stood a girl. Her hair dark black as well as her clothing.

”That’s the…ink..thief.” said Sam standing up. The Ink Thief points what had to be the magical pen in the air. Her eyes a blood shot red.

”Oh, highest witch I found you your pen” she said loudly. “Come to me oh great one!”

Soon in the sky an image appears of an older woman she was holding a paper that glitters and she begins to cackle once she saw the pen.

”YES- YESS! I should have used you from the start to search for the pen instead of controlling all of these weaklings. Controlling you, a professional Ink stealer should had been first. But…at least all these worthless creatures died.”

”GRANDMOTHER WILLY WHAT ARE YOU DOING!” screams Sierra running closer to the waters.

”I tried to save you daurling but you had nothing to do with me, remember? I begged you to stay and you LEFT me! And before I could kill you your pathetic parents conjure you up to them with that STUPID Magical Pen. Now, that my sister is dead. Once I get this pen and write it on the Magical paper, nothing can stop my powers! I will destroy the DOLL PALACE FOREVER and have complete control of not only Riken Hills but of this world! “

” Matha, How could you-“ begins Angela

”And YOU! I begged YOU not to marry that man! If I had that pen years ago I would have been KILL him off-but when I tried on that day the day you guys went near the Ween’s street he was SUPPOSE TO DIE I wrote it! However, my idiotic sister rewrote in her Crypt’s Tale that instead of dying you guys were sent to the Doll Palace. Truth be told….” Grandmother Willy snickers. “You guys brought this fate upon yourself. “

”If you…if you’re the witch of Darkness…that means, that means you killed my Great aunt! Grandmother Willy how…how could you?” Sierra said dropping to her knees.

”If she wasn’t so obstinate years ago she would still be alive, back in our land, our world” Grandmother Willy said nonchalant, not even caring about all the lives she has taken away.

Sierra suddenly grew angry. “ Well according to my Great AUNT, that means I am a witch too and once I get that pen away from her!—I will have the ultimate control of it.”

Grandmother Willy laughs, “Yes, while that may be true…without that pen to stop my actions I can control you. Just like I’ve been controlling the humans to look for the pen and kills all in their paths. Unlike before where I couldn’t find you. I see you quite clearly, and you’re in my ultimate control. Like it or not grand daughter you’re mine.” Grandmother Willy laughs as her image begins to disappear in the sky.

”MATHA-MATHA GET BACK HERE!—“ screams Angela crying. Sam holds unto his wife who became weak from the shocking discovery of the news.

”Daughter…we have to get that pen.” Said Sam as he notice the girl still holding the pen in the air.

”Daughter, daughter is you LISTENING TO ME!”

”Sierra?” said Angela softly. Sierra turns around with a cackling laugh while saliva leaves her lips her eyes a blood shot red.

Her parents hover in fear as they soon realizes, creatures and humans begins to gather up around them, their eyes red full of malice, hunger and wanted only the parents death.

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^_____^ THE END!!!

or...

Is...it..?

-evil laughs-
  

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Super_Gal_2852

53/Female
Germany
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Posted On: November 6, 2008
swizzle! i liked it! yaa fo u!
Original_scree

17/Female
Zionsville, IN
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Posted On: November 2, 2008
Amazing...except you killed me.

Still, love it.

--0Rii
never_more

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Posted On: October 31, 2008
thank you for your entry!!!!!
rocky095

19/Female
East Highland, CA
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Posted On: October 30, 2008
it is lovely! =D

let me know if you continue please!

-stef
rocky095

19/Female
East Highland, CA
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Posted On: October 30, 2008
it is lovely! =D

let me know if you continue please!

-stef
LyingNaked

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Posted On: October 30, 2008
Totally awesome.

xx pegg
Water_Demon

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Posted On: October 30, 2008
Thankies for the entry,

I truly LUBBLES IT!
xXLush_RoseXx

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Posted On: October 30, 2008
Roses as weapons, I totally rock in this story! You did a perfect me honestly. I loaf you and this story now.
hypa_happi_rea

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Posted On: October 30, 2008
Oh. That's creepy. I have red eyes? Cool.

xP

TW
StrawberryRose

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Posted On: October 30, 2008
Told you guys this chapter would be short ^^

I hope you guys liked it... I bet you all saw this all coming, huh?
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